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100 word challenge

May 24th, 2016 by and tagged ,

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A CARP PIE

Walking in the woods, I’m  on a journey to my grandmother’s house. I have to take her a pie (they look beautiful). As I turned the corner, I nearly fell, a huge death-defying drop was in front of me. It had never been there before, “Maybe it was made by work-men.” I wondered. Slow and steady, I arrived, I walked in and shouted, “Grandma I’m here.” Nobody answered, as the flame flickered and then went out, I began to tremble. I ventured all around the house, she wasn’t there. A dark figure approached the window…GRAN!

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It

May 24th, 2016 by and tagged

Where the sheep never graze,

where the wolves never roam.

It waits in a daze,

it waits in it’s home.

It sings it’s lullaby,

of it’s horded gold.

whilst the world goes by,

and it grows old.

When it steals treasure,

when it sneaks into your room.

it takes to it’s pleasure,

and returns to it’s house, in the valley of doom.

When you go to bed, go to sleep,

this will leave it to die in a heap.

Don’t stay awake up until morn,

otherwise, he will be reborn!

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Daisy – The Giant’s Necklace

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Daisy

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The Giant’s Necklace

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The Giant’s Necklace

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The Giant's necklace

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The Journey Home

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Slowly, I crept into the dark graveyard. I was going to put some flowers in my grandma’s grave, she was loved dearly by all the family. When I got there, I saw a shadow of a person or an animal, it was something like that. Scared, I gazed around to see if anyone else was there. Then, I heard groaning – my heart was now beating out of my chest. “Hello, are you okay over there?” I shouted. No reply. Despite hearing groaning, nervously I wondered over there to see if they were hurt. Petrified, I placed my hand in their shoulder, as I did so they got angry. Bright yellow eyes, blood stained teeth and goo coming out of their clothes. Running, I made it to the entrance, but there was a door in the way. So I went through it. Where was I? It looked a little bit like a tunnel, for the subway. Was it? Suddenly, there was a light. Was it leading to the opening? I ambled for ages, then finally, I reached the end. Now where was I? This place was a path, leading me into a forest. Hoping this was the way home, wearily I carried on a further, then found myself in the middle of a forest. Wait, what is that over there? I thought to myself. Behind the tree was a window glowing, at least I think it was a window. I yanked open the doors to it, inside it looked gloomy. Then I realised, it’s taking me back to the graveyard. Carefully, I stepped forward. There it was. The open gate leading out of the graveyard. Sprinting, I ran all the way home and told my mum everything. But she didn’t believe me.

A few years later, I was watching T.V and I heard a knock on the door, I answered it. It was the creature from the graveyard, I slammed the door shut. Hoping I will never see it again.

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100WC (…as the flame flickered and then went out…)

May 24th, 2016 by and tagged ,

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10007 Conor G

 

Staggering in the heavy rain, a threadbare, podgy man stepped into my tranquil street- Light Lane ( lit by lamp posts). As the flame flickered and then went out, the  street became completely black: the figure of the man still appeared in the moon light. Slowly, I peered out of my steamed-up  window and saw him chuckle and scream, ” Jam-Jacks-mail has returned!” Suddenly and nervously, he looked at me… I closed the certain. Fear choked me with it’s murderous hands, gripping my throat and strangling my breath into short, shallow gasps. I opened my black-out curtains once more… he was gone!

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100 wc

May 24th, 2016 by and tagged ,

A CARP PIE  My comments – 10002 Jacek  9984 sean

Feeling sick with fear, I cautiously edged towards the cave – it was my last hope. Within the depths of it, I saw a light : Reassured, I made my way in, dreading the consequences. I got onto my hands and knees and began to crawl ; I remembered why why I was doing it, I had to get home. Suddenly,  as the flame flickered and then went out, I stopped dead in my tracks. What would happen? Scared and wary, I tried to turn around, hoping that I would be as lucky this time as I was last time. Then something happened.

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Reading stem!

May 23rd, 2016 by and tagged ,

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Recently, I have finished ‘My Secret Unicorn, Snowy Dreams’ by Linda Chapman.

Here is my stem from when I had only read a couple of pages:

So far, Lauren and her pony/unicorn Twilight have a problem. Laura saw that her beloved horse was upset, so when everyone in her house went to sleep,  she got dressed and went out in the cold garden. Only Lauran knows twilight can turn into a pony. I visualise a cold girl with roses cheeks and wrapped up warm, also she is always checking to see if no-one is watching.

I am wondering why this book is called ‘Snowy Dreams.’ Up to now, there is no snow.

Here horse looks very sad. If I were Lauren, I would do everything to make Twilight happy. That’s exactly what Lauren did.

Here is when the book was finished by me:

Now, I have finished ‘My Secret Unicorn, Snowy Dreams,’ by Linda Chapman.

In this story, we are all ready know a girl and a unicorn are best friends. I am inferring having a unicorn is very fun! Before,  I didn’t understand why this book was called ‘Snowy Dreams,’ but  now I know – later on, it snowed for ages and the setting was covered in snow.

Amazing and exciting, Lauren and twilight go on wonderful adventures. But when  Twilight had a secret, Lauren, assumes the worst.  I am curio  about what the secret is?

The secret might pull apart the two, so Lauren is desperate to know what it is. If Lauren knew the secret, if Twilight would  just tell her, if it would just say in the unicorn book why Twilight is sad, then everyone will be happy.

Slowly Lauren finds out the mystery, but I will leave you to find out what that is?

My favourite part was when Twilight and Lauren said one of their  friends, Jo-Ann (who go hurt). Twilights magic powers heal Jo’s broken leg enough so she could walk.  Jo-Ann really hurt herself but Lauran and twilight saved the day!     You should read this book. I rate  it four stars, every page is amazing and exciting.

Here is a drawing I did, and Mrs Duxdurys feedback:

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Harry Potter & The Prisoner of Azkaban

May 23rd, 2016 by and tagged ,

I have been reading Harry Potter and The Prisoner of Azkaban, and this is what it is about:

At first, Harry is at his aunt and uncle’s house, but then he accidentally blows up his aunt because Harry is secretly a wizard! When he runs away, he finds out that Ron and Hermione – his friends – are staying at ‘The Leaky Cauldron’. But when they had finished eating, Harry overheard Mr and Mrs Weasley (Ron’s parents) talking about Sirius Black (a escaped prisoner). Apparently, he wants to kill Harry, just like he told Voldemort to kill Harry’s Parents.

On the train, a Azkaban guard, a Dementor, comes along and knocks Harry out. Also, the Dementors stopped Harry from winning his first Quidditch match of the season. At Halloween, Sirius Black tore  down the door of the Fat Lady, the door to Gryffindor common room. To add to that damage, he nearly killed Ron after the Quidditch semi-final.

On the second-to-last week of the school year, something extra-ordinary happened. When Harry, Ron and Hermione were going back to the castle, Scabbers, Ron’s rat, and a black dog, turned out to be Sirius Black and Peter Pettigrew. But then Remus Lupin, the Defence against the Dark Arts teacher, turned out to be a werewolf and broke Ron’s leg.

In the hospital wing, Dumbledore gave Harry and Hermione a task to free Sirius by going back in time by using a time turner.

That is what the book is about.

 

From James

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