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James- The Giant’s Necklace

May 25th, 2016 by

Please click the picture to read my work.

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2 Responses to “James- The Giant’s Necklace”

  1.   Salman Says:

    1. Prominent vocabulary , how could you get better!
    2. How could you work on your handwriting?
    3. Try to break your work down in sentences.

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  2.   Frank Says:

    WOW that is some fantastic piece of writing!
    Is this piece of writing a part of the story the giants necklace?
    Can you improve punctuation mostly commas to make your epic writing even more fantastic.

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