Determined and focused, the lion sat and waited for his prey.
Beautiful but dangerous, the island could explode with lava at any time.
Menacingly, the lion lay and waited for his next meal.
Peacefully, the water lapped against the rocks.
Silent and still, the lion who was ravenous, waited for his next meal.
Small but dangerous the rocks edges, which were sharp, lay just beneath the sea.
This entry was posted by 11jack on 10th November 2017 at 1:54 pm, and is filed under Uncategorised. Follow any responses to this post through RSS 2.0.
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I love your sentences, good use of describing words.
Next time try and make your sentences a bit longer.
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