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100 word challenge (22.5.17)

May21

This weeks prompt is… ‘so I voted yes’

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the epocolypes part 2

May21

It was Monday the 1st of March.I had been rescued at last by some soilders who found us hiding in our air raid shelter.We walked outside the,air smelt like burning rubber we were led to a van that went to the airport the bright white plane glistened sharply as the sun set like cheese melting down.My mum -tired and overwhelmed- told me we were going to Africa I was pleased to get out of wretched England.When we got there there was a lion pride sitting on a rock then one of the lions pounced trying to get a bird that was passing it got it and gobbled it up in the blink of and eye.When we got to the house I went straight to sleep maybe it won’t be that bad.

 

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100 WC

May21

“Under a steep hill, there is a place where no one has ever been.Apart from three people and These three people were only children and do you you know what happened after a couple of minutes they entered a room and they intantly collapsed well that’s what everyone has heard and it has been never been explored since but I guarantee some one will one day and I wonder would they die in horable death or was the story a mith find out next time pees out.”

 

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The snowy night

May21

One scary night, at this time I was driving to my uncle’s house at midnight to see what he was doing but then a really creepy school bus was following me.

” I need to get away from this school bus and quick!”

at least I was in a Lamborghini so I lost the weirdo in the bus then there was two coming to get me but it was all snowy here but  I wen’t on then a cop was there. After I told him what happened and they stoped them and after that I got there safe and sound then… Read the rest of this entry »

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The haunted house

May21

One day on the hill side sat a house people say this house is honted I don’t believe it but yes. My mum shouted me “Lily  come down stairs now please I need you” I’m coming! Mummy  ok what is up I’m dieing go one move on in life Lilly was so up set Shem went out to play one her owne she told the techer the next day. She said I can’t wait to go home I’ll have a jojo bow waiting for me . When she got home out side the haunted door was my mum ley ther on the floor with a jojo bow in her hand the haunted house…

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100WC – the snow cabin

May21

In a happy city, where people were staying in villas, a lovely teenage girl arrived, driving through the huge iron gates of DahlDale.  Charlotte (the girl) was searching for a decent place to stay. She was in a car with her mother and she was coming here to see her friend Emily. As she couldn’t drive (because she was 15) her mum had to bring her and drive her around for hours on end. As they drove up the north of the town, a sign caught her eye. It read, ‘stay in our luxury snow cabin for only £5 a week!’. “BINGO!” She yelled as she knew this was the perfect place and it was under her budget to spend! She said her goodbyes and ran up to the cabin. As she walked there was red moisture in the snow! She saw A bag that said, ‘EMILY WILKINSON’! “Emily? Are you okay?” Charlotte yelled. Finally she heard a LOUD scream!…

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Snowy night

May21

Exited but anxious I trudged up the slippery hill.I was going to meet my cousin Macie-who had told me to come and see her-when I got there she told me we were going to the old abandoned graveyard at the edge and I mean edge. So we set off loads of people had said they had seen ghosts and aliens or even zombies.

As we got further down the hill it started to snow and there in front of us was the creepy wood cabin which the wind howled through.  Somebody was murded there and they never found the body.Just at that very moment a shadow ran past when I turnedaround my cousin had gone and then a hand fell apon my shoulder and then strangers hand slipped of my shoulder and WACK! they hit me on the head with a base ball bat I fell to the ground and was left there in the cold.

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100 wc

May21

Sauntering down the snowy ,cold and wet road ,I came across this unusual house I’d never noticed or seemed to care about before .This time as I looked at it it seemed to be diferent,like there was some sort off life and character to it,but for all the the years off me and my parents living on this street we’ve never seen anybody come in or out off it.

That night as I was getting my pyjamas on I saw a dull light flicker on in the old abandoned house.rushing down the stairs-to get my yellow and white dotted rain coat- because I was about to do something nobody had ever done before. As I knocked on the old tattered door off the rotting house something pulled me inside … !!!!!!!

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100 WC

May21

it was December 2014 and street lights were unable to use because of the snowstorm. My house ( snow caped and grey bricked) had been hit the most by the snow storm. “Mum will we ever get out of our tremendous house?” cried William, ” yes dear we’ll be out by tomorrow.”

It was now Sunday and we were planning to go to the pictures but the snow from yesterday was still there. We tried to climb through the window but when we poked a stick at the window the stick turned to ice. “Mum is Harry Potter here?” Asked my four year old brother. “Oh Timmy you always put a smile on my face.” My mum and I had to call the fire brigade to help us free.

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The spooky house

May21

One Christmas Eve I went to my cousins house, When I got where it looked so wired and knowone was in it. Scared and shivary,I noked on the door but it was open so I walked in with a gun shape in my hand. Jullya came with me and even she thought it was spooky. There was blood on the wall a knife on the table and there was my cousin on the floor with blood all over her we evenchaly called the cops it was a sirens matter and it wasn’t funny and he was coming for me now

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The shadow house

May21

Scary and shocked the old man crepeted that towards the garage and got a great big shovel to dig some plants for the copatiton of the biggest plants in the world and if you do you have won  £1,000,000 just for the biggest plant on earth  that’s why you’re going to get loads of money because it is the biggest thing in the world over 2000 people is doing it .” Knock knock hello my name is Russell I am nine years old I am a scout from the campaign people.”

i don’t care . As he slammed the door.

“knock knock my name is Russell I am nine years old.”

Russell stomped over the plants and pulled them out off the soil.

 

 

 

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