2 thoughts on “Email for Christopher”

  1. Hello Hasan,

    I really enjoyed this piece of writing that you did Hasan especially this part ‘We were talking about what we were going to wear for Halloween but you will not believe what she said, are you ready? A UNICORN!’ Also, your openers are great this one for example, ‘Crying huge tears, I went to the toilet until Mum came.’ However, you haven’t read your work because there are some spelling errors and puntuation errors. So please read your work it will make you a better writer.

    By Benyamin.

  2. Hi Hasan,
    I really like your mail that you did ,especially “We were talking about what we was going to be for Halloween but you will not believe what summer said a UNICORN! I also like the part where you put From August (the coolest) However you could spell some words correctly.

    From Cade

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