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100 WC …a whistle blew and everyone disappeared…

June 13th, 2016 by and tagged ,

Comments:  Alex           Harrison

Deep down in the center of the Earth, a colony of ants gathered round the Earth’s core (‘The Orb of life’ is what they call it). A GIGANTIC ant- as old as the hills – stood on top of the orb. Slowly, it raised a wrinkled hand… squealed a little… and a whistle blew and everyone disappeared. Underneath the orb, a  great thundering noise arose: the ants began to mine. Cautiously, I walked towards one of the ants,

“What are you doing?”I asked the ant,”what are you mining for?”

He looked at me, his eyes glowing! Suddenly, I began to dig!

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100wc 23.5.16

May 24th, 2016 by and tagged ,

My comments: 100001 Audrey  9962 Daniel

A CARP PIE    SOME;OTHER    IF IF IF THEN

In 1942 it all happened. Mischievously, my friends and I went exploring in an abandoned house (which was practically falling apart). Some people likes exploring; others prefer staying at home. My house was about thirty-five minutes away. Lighting a candle, my friend lit one (which lasted about five minutes) it became a vivid orange. After, they began exploring. Unexpected, as the flame flickered and went out, it all happened.

“HELP!” we all screamed simultaneously. The next thing I knew I was in hospital. If we all stayed at home, then we would have never been bombed or been in hospital!

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100 Word Challenge

May 24th, 2016 by and tagged ,

Draft 1         Swam, orange, pyjamas, thunder, silence

Angrily, Sally stomped up the stairs to get her shoes and coat – she was getting ready to go to her swimming lesson. In the car, the family sat in silence, the only thing to be seen and heard was the thunder and lightening! After finishing getting changed, she gave a sigh of relief. She had remembered that today is when they have their tests in pyjamas. Some people (like Sally) remembered this; others didn’t and had come in their costumes. Trembling with embarrassment, Chloe stood there in her bright orange costume. Sadly was really happy: she had swam the fastest.

Draft 2

Angrily Sally stomped up the stairs – the family had just had an argument. She was just about to go to her swimming lesson. In the car, the family sat in silence, the only thing to be seen and heard was the thunder and lightening! Bored but interested, Sally stood and watched the other group do their test in their pyjamas. Although they were young, they were amazingly-talented. Some people (like Sally) had remembered their pyjamas; others hadn’t. Trembling with embarrassment, Zoe, who was Sally’s best friend, had come in her orange costume. Sally was really happy: she had swam the fastest.

Draft 3

Angrily, Sally stomped up the stairs – the family had just had a pointless argument. She was just about to go to her swimming lesson. In the car, the family sat in silence, the only sound to be heard was the terrifying thunder! Bored but interested, Sally stood and watched the other group do their test in their pyjamas. Although they were young, they were amazingly-talented. Some people (like Sally) had pyjamas; others hadn’t. Trembling with embarrassment, Zoe, who was Sally’s best friend, had come in her bright orange costume. Sally was happy with herself: she had swam the fastest.

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As the flame flickered and then went out 100wc

May 24th, 2016 by and tagged ,

ACARPPIE

I wondered along the cliff face searching for a place to take cover for the night. Suddenly, I found an abandoned cave, which had a rich deposit of candles sat there in the corner of my eye. Determined and tired, I made a flame, but as the flame flickered and then went out, the whole cave began to shake. After the mysterious shake, I cautiously walked out of the cave, only to find the whole city in ruins. Sobbing hopelessly, I murmured,” Is my family okay? Have they survived?” I searched for hours but no one could be seen.

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100wc …as the flame flickered and then went out…

May 24th, 2016 by and tagged ,

A.C.A.R.P.P.I.E     ,  .  ?    9962- Daniel  9963- Daniel

I opened my eyes, alive, I think. Trapped in this dungeon for ages, I thought of a master plan to get my revenge on the evil mastermind, who was called Darth Vader. In the dungeon, all I had to live was a candle that flickered every second. Filling my head with bad memories, the soldiers hunted me down, to be trapped in this very place. Loudly, he came to my cell, he didn’t say a word. All of a sudden, darkness smothered the light. Then a blue lightsaber gave light to my eyes. What was he doing with a blue one?

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100 Word Challenge

May 24th, 2016 by and tagged ,

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A   CARP   PIE

Scared and anxious, I shivered as the flame flickered and then went out!What’s going to happen to me? I thought to myself. In the woods, it was pitch black – I had gone to collect some chestnut-brown colour fire wood. Sprinting, my heart was beating hard. But it was just too dark: I couldn’t see where I was going. Suddenly, there was a sound; I couldn’t quite figure out what it was. Curiously, I thought of what it could be. A deer (who sounded kinda lost as well). Worried, I wondered if I was going to get home before 11 o’clock.

 

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100wc Silence Orange Thunder Pyjamas Swam

May 23rd, 2016 by and tagged ,

9526-Marina 9505-Jackson             ACARPPIE  ,  .  –  ”  ”  ?

In the silence of the night, the creature swam in the muddy swamp. Although it is an animal, it wears vibrant orange pyjamas with a picture of Thor the God Of Thunder. Awkwardly, it thinks that he will get more friends if someone can see him in the dark night, but everyone thinks it is ridiculously stupid to wear- that is because he is an adult. One week ago, this poor creature got humiliated by everyone. “Why are you wearing that top, baby?” they mocked. Embarrassed, it ran away from it’s home, to be protected from the taunts and mockery.

 

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May 23rd, 2016 by and tagged

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Isabel 9643

Quickly, the silence stopped as soon as Mr Liffet walked in. He was the oldest teacher in the school. In the class, Bella laughed. He had come in with his orange pyjamas on. Scared, the children scattered to their first lesson.  Bella swam for her life incase she got told off. Thunder filled the air outside. ” AHHH!” Bella has been scared of thunder since she was a baby. Bella got told off because she had screamed. All of a sudden, Mr Luffet fainted and ambulances filled the playground…  No-one has ever seen Mr Luffet again.

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100 word challenge

May 23rd, 2016 by and tagged

 

Comments: 9562 Adele and 9561 Brad              ACARPPIE

My alarm clock made an ear piercing noise that woke me up with a shock. I was drowsy and wasn’t really thinking properly that day. Thoughtlessly, set of on my journey to school in my pyjamas [which had orange juice stains on!] Suddenly, I found myself standing in front of the school gates with a crowd around me laughing and calling me names, the endless stream of smirking children was unbearable, I swam through the crowd of children and  raced home to my father. I never went to school in my pyjamas ever again and if I ever did I made sure that they were clean.

 

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100WC (Silence, orange, swam, thunder, pyjamas )

May 23rd, 2016 by and tagged ,

Comments: 9582 Izabel      9526 Marina Read the rest of this entry »

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